still silent water.
lethargic, rotting wood
naps half submerged
not bothered to exhale
murky liquid
and i
stand as a monument
attesting to nothing less
than deterioration
of something once
overjoyed
to tilt a browning face
skywards
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Sounds negative - like its hard to let go of a time that was once filled with happyness. Then ends with the sky. I always make the connection of the sky as a postive. Like aiight, this sucks where I am at right now, but from here it can only get better. sky as in going up. I dunno, thats what I got from it >;x
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